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How To Build a Believable Character Arc
“Good characters are why most people read, I think.” -Joe Bunting, best-selling American writer What is a character arc? A character arc is different from a story arc, which is the framework of a story. A character arc is a series of events that build that character. Through these events, readers glimpse the character’s inner battles and witness the growth those challenges inspire. The character goes through a journey—physical, emotional, or spiritual—and grows through it. Wh

Joy Holmes
Dec 20, 20253 min read


A Proofreader's Perspective: Any Girl But You by Dana Hawkins
Any Girl But You by Dana Hawkins is a meet-cute sapphic romance set during the holiday season in a small town in Minnesota. The story follows Quinn Lee, a New York executive assistant who decides to sink her life savings into her family’s failing Christmas tree farm, and Zoey, a soft-hearted baker who is unprepared for the opinionated Quinn when they encounter one another in Zoey’s shop. As their respective businesses face challenges as the holidays approach, the two women f

Joy Holmes
Dec 17, 20251 min read


What Makes A Love Story Feel Authentically Sapphic?
As a lesbian, sapphic stories hold a special place in my heart. I want to read stories that are representative of my experiences as a woman who loves other women, and for those experiences to represented with authenticity. When I say authenticity, I don’t mean perfection or rigid representation, but stories that resonate with emotional truth and characters that are realistic and believable. Sapphic romance has evolved—readers now crave layered, lived-in portrayals of queer wo

Joy Holmes
Oct 19, 20252 min read


Top 5 Mistakes in Romance Manuscripts
Understanding the Role of a Beta Reader As a beta reader, my role is crucial. I provide insights that help authors refine their stories. This process is essential for creating a book that resonates with its audience. My feedback focuses on emotional connections, character development, and plot coherence. Mistake 1: Inconsistent Characterization When characters act outside of their established traits, this raises red flags in readers. Why? Readers need to believe in the charac

Joy Holmes
Sep 18, 20252 min read


Why Continuity Matters in Love Stories
Continuity is important in most stories, but especially love stories. Readers expect that what they read in one scene carry over to...

Joy Holmes
Sep 9, 20252 min read


How Typos Can Kill The Mood In A Romance Scene
Whether I’m proofreading a novel between a heterosexual couple or beta reading a manuscript that features women loving women, I’m always...

Joy Holmes
Aug 26, 20252 min read


What I Look For When Beta Reading Sapphic Fiction:
Authentic Representation of Queer Characters Are the sapphic characters written with depth and individuality? Do they have their own...

Joy Holmes
Aug 13, 20252 min read


A Beta Reader Review: Like First Love, Again by J.J. Arias
I enjoy dissecting a story, exploring the characters, and discussing what happened. That's why I became a beta reader. So, I also write...

Joy Holmes
Aug 2, 20251 min read


A Proofreader's Perspective: Book Lovers by T.B. Markinson & Miranda MacLeod
Book Lovers by T.B Markinson and Miranda MacLeod is a sapphic friends-to-lovers romance that started off a little slow but eventually...

Joy Holmes
Jul 14, 20251 min read


Beta Reader Review: Finding Molly Parsons
I enjoy dissecting a story, exploring the characters, and discussing what happened. That's why I became a beta reader. So, I also write...

Joy Holmes
Jul 5, 20251 min read


Beta Reader Review: The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo by Taylor Jenkins Reid
I recently revisited The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo in audiobook format, and the production quality elevated an already gripping...

Joy Holmes
Jun 30, 20251 min read


The Role of Conflict in Storytelling: Why Every Great Story Needs It
What is Conflict? Merriam-Webster defines conflict as clash, competition, or mutual interference of opposing or incompatible forces or...

Joy Holmes
Aug 14, 20241 min read


Character Archetypes: The Foundations of Memorable Stories
Archetypes are templates or prototypes that can be used to design a character. They can be used as a base from which to build a...

Joy Holmes
Jul 30, 20244 min read


Worldbuilding 101
One of the most vital elements of any romantasy story is its setting. Fantasy readers crave worlds that are rich, immersive, and full of...

Joy Holmes
Jul 9, 20244 min read


Editing vs. Proofreading: What’s the Difference?
What’s the difference between editing and proofreading? I’m here to shine a little light on the subject! What is Editing? Merriam-Webster...

Joy Holmes
Jun 13, 20241 min read


Beta Readers vs Editors
You may be asking yourself, “What’s the difference between a beta reader and an editor?” Well, I’m here to explain the distinction. What...

Joy Holmes
Apr 9, 20241 min read


ARC Readers vs. Beta Readers: What’s the Difference?
What is an ARC Reader? ARC stands for Advanced Review Copy, and ARC readers are unpaid contributors who affect the reputation of a book....

Joy Holmes
Mar 31, 20241 min read


A Proofreader's Perspective: Pretend to Be My Cowboy by Sophia Quinn
Pretend to Be My Cowboy by Sophia Quinn is a sweet/clean romance with Christian undertones. Emma O’Sullivan is a kindergarten teacher...

Joy Holmes
Mar 15, 20241 min read


A Proofreader's Perspective: Not a Sparrow Falls by Lynnette Bonner
Not a Sparrow Falls by Lynnette Bonner is a historic Christian romance novel. When Charlotte gets her heart broken, she responds to an...

Joy Holmes
Feb 23, 20241 min read


A Proofreader's Perspective: Yesterday’s Treasures by Jessie Gussman
Yesterday’s Treasures by Jessie Gussman is a faith-based second-chance romance novel about Lindy, a woman who leaves her workaholic...

Joy Holmes
Feb 17, 20241 min read
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