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Writing Emotion Without Being Melodramatic
There are a few reasons that writers often hesitate to write emotion. For one, it limits the reader’s ability to project their own emotions onto the character’s experience. Another reason is that many writers fear thoughts and circumstances that bring about feelings of hate, shame, guilt, terror, deep sadness, and dread. And a third reason is that many writers do not want to cross the line from emotional expression into melodrama. There is a common confusion that strong emoti

Joy Holmes
3 days ago5 min read


How To Build a Believable Character Arc
“Good characters are why most people read, I think.” -Joe Bunting, best-selling American writer What is a character arc? A character arc is different from a story arc, which is the framework of a story. A character arc is a series of events that build that character. Through these events, readers glimpse the character’s inner battles and witness the growth those challenges inspire. The character goes through a journey—physical, emotional, or spiritual—and grows through it. Wh

Joy Holmes
Dec 20, 20253 min read


What Makes a Love Story Feel Authentically Sapphic?
As a lesbian, sapphic stories hold a special place in my heart. I want to read stories that represent my experiences as a woman who loves other women. It is important for these experiences to be depicted with authenticity. When I say authenticity, I don’t mean perfection or rigid representation. I mean stories that resonate with emotional truth and feature characters that are realistic and believable. Sapphic romance has evolved. Readers now crave layered, lived-in portrayals

Joy Holmes
Oct 19, 20253 min read
The Importance of Continuity in Love Stories
Continuity is vital in most narratives, but it holds particular significance in love stories. Readers expect that details from one scene carry over to the next. This consistency allows for a seamless flow of events that often goes unnoticed. However, sudden changes—like a character's eye color or an unexpected shift in the love interest's location—can disrupt the reader's experience. Such hiccups can harm the believability of the love story. What is Continuity in a Romance No

Joy Holmes
Sep 9, 20253 min read


How Typos Can Kill The Mood In A Romance Scene
Whether I’m proofreading a novel between a heterosexual couple or beta reading a manuscript that features women loving women, I’m always...

Joy Holmes
Aug 26, 20252 min read


What I Look For When Beta Reading Sapphic Fiction:
Authentic Representation of Queer Characters Are the sapphic characters written with depth and individuality? Do they have their own...

Joy Holmes
Aug 13, 20252 min read


The Role of Conflict in Storytelling: Why Every Great Story Needs It
What is Conflict? Merriam-Webster defines conflict as clash, competition, or mutual interference of opposing or incompatible forces or...

Joy Holmes
Aug 14, 20241 min read


Character Archetypes: The Foundations of Memorable Stories
Archetypes are templates or prototypes that can be used to design a character. They can be used as a base from which to build a...

Joy Holmes
Jul 30, 20244 min read


Worldbuilding 101
One of the most vital elements of any romantasy story is its setting. Fantasy readers crave worlds that are rich, immersive, and full of...

Joy Holmes
Jul 9, 20244 min read


Editing vs. Proofreading: What’s the Difference?
What’s the difference between editing and proofreading? I’m here to shine a little light on the subject! What is Editing? Merriam-Webster...

Joy Holmes
Jun 13, 20241 min read


ARC Readers vs. Beta Readers: What’s the Difference?
What is an ARC Reader? ARC stands for Advanced Review Copy, and ARC readers are unpaid contributors who affect the reputation of a book....

Joy Holmes
Mar 31, 20241 min read


Beta Readers: The Literary World’s Testers
Where Does The Term "Beta Reading" Come From? The word “beta” is a term used in software development. “Beta testers” review rough or...

Joy Holmes
Feb 7, 20241 min read
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